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using money in proper way In modern sociaty, people often compete who is ricer than others and buy majiastic cars, ecpensive jewelry and so on. Thereby, some colledge students go after that. they use money to buy luxury goods just for display. So using money in proper way is essential for us. As a student, we don't make money by hands and still live depend on parents. we shoudn't waste money parents giving us to have recreations all day. besides, we should know that our parents making money is not easy. we should repect to them but not waste thier money.we should using money properly for developing a good habit. if you do that all the time, you would get a new life tip.you know how to administrate your fortune and how to arrange it. if you get it, you may be a wise man. we must recognize our states. we are university student. we must devote ourselves to study experience or business but not follow the bad air to lose ourselves and be slave of money.
