词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Dear David, Glad to hear from you. Recently, I knew that you are coming to Beijing in order to learn Chinese. As a Chinese native speaker, I have some advice for you to help you master the language sooner and better. Firstly, don't be lazy. Learning a language needs a lot of efforts, especially when studying new words and expressions. From the moment you start learning Chinese characters, you need to focus on it and try your best to memorize every part of a word. It may be a little boring at first, but after a while you will find Chinese characters interesting! Secondly, be willing to review. We are human. Our memory can't last forever. Therefore, it is of great significance to review. The best cycle for reviewing is to review 5 minutes, 15 minutes, 60 minutes, 1 day, 15 days and 30 days after your learning process. Only doing this can you make your short-term memory into long-term or even permanent memory. Last but not least, try to keep yourself staying in "Chinese environment". Since you'll be in Beijing, it's easy for you to stay in the environment. You should talk to Chinese friends, for instance, or watch Chinese movies, listen to Chinese songs and read Chinese passages. Chinese culture is brilliant and you'll find that very entertaining! That's all. I'm looking forward to hear from you again and I wish you can learn Chinese very well. Yours, Wang Ming