单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文中衔接词丰富。
Mr Li is my new english teacher. He has a curled hair and a big mouth. He like to ask me to stand in front of the blackboard to dictate the words we learned in last class. I usually do a god job. So I like to have my English lesson and like my English teacher.