小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog named Dudu. He is energetic like a young soldier in the whole day although he is nine years old. He likes to run follow me around our house and never barks at neighbourhoods. So everyone likes Dudu and feeds him much food. He turns fat day by day because of these enthusiam person. Under my great pressure,He is on diet nowadays. Eating more vegetables, doing more excercise make him feel thinner and healther. I think he will accompany with us for the next nine years.