小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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This is Jim's family. The old man with white beard is his grandfather who retired as a accountant from a iron factory . The slim yound lady with red long hair was her wife who married him last year but devoiced several months ago,and then married his grandfather. The tallest guy is her brother. He is a single because of his poorness and ugliness although he is already thirty-five years old. What a compicated family!