小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强。

This is Jim's family. The old man with white beard is his grandfather who retired as an accountant from a factory . The slim young lady with red long hair was her wife who married him last year but devoiced several months ago,and then married his grandfather. The tallest guy is her brother. He is a single because of his poorness and ugliness although he is already thirty-five years old. What a complicated family!