文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;文章组织结构良好;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩。
There are a lot of magnificent clocks at many corners in Mr Brown's home . The biggest clock which one can bring out classic music is on the wall in the guest room . The smallest one is an alarm clock on the desk near his bed. The most beautiful clock is the one like a butterfly sticked on the wall behind the sofa. It's his son's favorite clock, he likes to take it down and plays it like a toy.