小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend, he is a 16 years boy. He is tall , and he is a humorous.he have a long hear and he is big. but he very shy, he always made his face red when he talk with the girl. he is so lovely that almost all girl love he. and he also is many people's friend.