小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend, he is a 16-year-boy. He is tall, and he is humorous.He has a long hair and he is big. But he very shy, he always made his face red when he talks with the girl. He is so lovely that almost all girl loves, and he also is many people's friend.