文章衔接手法恰当;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒。
I have a good friend, he is 16-year-boy. He is tall, and he is humorous.He has a long hair and he is big. But he is very, he always made his face red when he talks with the girl. He is so lovely that almost all girl loves, and he also is many people's friend.