2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

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The Mid-Autumn Festival I am a Chinese,and I am a grade 9 student.China has mang festivals.Today I will talk to you a festival.It's The Mid-Autumn Festival.It's on 15 Auguest.It's a happily festival,and It's glomeration festival.In that,we should eat moon cake and enjoy the full moon and so on.When that,all people on the same place.