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2012年专四作文真题:端午节

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:51浏览次数:6299
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题目 The Dragon Boat Festival
说明 The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确;文章衔接手法恰当;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。

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With the further development of the reform and opening-up policy and economic globalization, communications between China and The United States move forward continuously. In 2005, Lou Xianyan published Views on Friendship of China and The United States, which revealed that the differences of friendship in the definition“friend”, building and keeping up friendship, expectation for friends, and explained the fundamental reason is the different value of two cultures. In 2006,Lu Yan pointed out the differences of friendship of both China and The United States in five aspects like independence and interdependence, equality and hierarchy mobility and stability, the self and harmony, High Context Culture and Low Context Culture in American Friendship in the Eyes of the Chinese People. In 2007, Lu Xin and Wang Xiaofang have published the similar article A Comparative Research on Views friendship of China and The United States. The angles that they considered differ from Lou Xianyan’s. They mainly focused on four perspectives like circle of friends, firmness of friendship, different values of two cultures and different understand for responsibility of friends. In 2008, analyzing and contrasting the views on friendship from the perspective of intimacy of friends, the interpersonal relationship has been divided into four types by Huang Ying including tool type, emotional type, compound type, purpose of making friends and responsibility of being a friend. The same year, Hu Jinchan published forever friends "friends" and analyzed the different views on friendship between man and woman in America. An important trait mentioned is the tolerance in American friendship. What’s more, Chu Jingli, from the perspective of cultural freedom, equality, frankness, explained the American friendship by analyzing the cultural difference happened to Friends in Cultural Difference between China and The United States in Friends written by him in 2008. Meanwhile, he also pointed out that the Chinese friendship was influenced by Confucianism. The Chinese friendship has developed to be a face view, which became the barrier of friendship for the Chinese. Moreover, American cultural individualism in “friends” written by Sun Xiaoyan showed that the core of American culture is individualism, and analyzed individual value involving individual independence, individual responsibility and esteem for others. In 2009, Xu Ke has summarized views and ways of making friends, then have drawn the differences from the perspective of collectivism and individualism. There were many detailed descriptions on the collectivism of Chinese friendship and the individualism and pragmatism of American friendship. In addition, Xu Ke put forward several approaches to handle by cited Hofs De's theory of cultural variation. In 2009, Shen Jianlei published Comparative Study on Views on Friendship between China and American, so detailedly described differences of ways of treating friends, ways of keeping up friendship, expectation for friends between Chinese and Americans. In 2010, famous writer Bi Shumin published essay the tree of friendship, the trustful fruits. Friendship has been described cultural objectives. The old cultural relic is more precious. Bi Shumin pointed that the basis of friendship is in mutual appreciation and mutual hearkening. In 2011, Gao Fangqin published Comparison of Views on Friendship between China and The United States and analyzed the difference form three aspects including range, time and responsibility. In 2012, Yang Min published views on friendship between China and the united states based on motto of making friends, and analyzed the differences of the definition for friends in two cultures, the time of maintaining friendship, the scope of making friendship, purpose of making friends, ways of building friends, expectation for friends. In 2013, Li Qingli has pointed out that the difference of treating friends, purpose of making friends and scope of making friends between China and The United States from a new angle. In 2014,Zhang Ting has published contrastive analysis of mode of friendship between China and The United States which revealed that analyzed the width and depth of making friends, time of sustaining friendship, classification of the friend, obligation and responsibility and so forth based on Diffusion Theory and Specificity Theory by comparison of friendship between collectivism and individualism under both of two cultures.

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