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文章用词灵活多样，高级词汇使用也比较准确；文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
Of friendship, a famous literary work, written by Emerson. The work expresses the general people’s attitudes towards friendship. The work reflects the principle that they choose someone as their friends. As the writer said that there are two elements that go to the composition of friendship, each so sovereign that I can detect no superiority in either[7]which demonstrates that the essence of making friends is equality. Besides, as Emerson said in the essay that one is Truth. A friend is a person with whom I may be sincere. Before him I may think aloud. I am arrived at last in the presence of a man so real and equal, that I may drop even those undermost garments of dissimulation, courtesy, and second thought, which men never put off, and may deal with him with the simplicity and wholeness with which one chemical atom meets another[8]which expresses the American’s orientation of being friends. These factors such as Equality, mutual recognition, sincerity are the core of friendship. Friends need not to pretend while a friend may well be reckoned the masterpiece of nature. According to the survey, since 1985, the data have shown that the friendship is constantly losing in quality and quantity. Furthermore, research has been demonstrated that one quarter Americans have no intimacy confidants who can reveal their true feelings and the quantity of confidants have declined from four persons to two persons in terms of the average quantity. Kornblum,Janet have published his research on the USA Today and declared that one quarter Americans have no confidants.
