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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Of friendship, a famous literary work, written by Emerson. The work expresses the general people’s attitudes towards friendship. The work reflects the principle that they choose someone as their friends. which demonstrates that the essence of making friends is equality. Besides, as Emerson said in the essay which expresses the American’s orientation of being friends. These factors such as Equality, mutual recognition, sincerity are the core of friendship. Friends need not to pretend while a friend may well be reckoned the masterpiece of nature. According to the survey, since 1985, the data have shown that the friendship is constantly losing in quality and quantity. Furthermore, research has been demonstrated that one quarter Americans have no intimacy confidants who can reveal their true feelings and the quantity of confidants have declined from four persons to two persons in terms of the average quantity. Kornblum,Janet have published his research on the USA Today and declared that one quarter Americans have no confidants.
