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如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；请注意积累词汇量，还要注意单词拼写；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
Of friendship, a famous literary works, written by Emerson. The work expresses the general people’s attitudes towards friendship. The work reflects the principle that they choose someone as their friends. As the writer said thatwhich demonstrates that the essence of making friends is equality. Besides, as Emerson said in the essay that
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