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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；请作者增加词汇丰富度，同时仔细检查单词拼写；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
Of friendship, a famous literary work, written by Emerson. The work expresses the general people’s attitudes towards friendship. The work reflects the principle that they choose someone as their friends. As the writer said thatwhich demonstrates that the essence of making friends is equality. Besides, as Emerson said in the essay that
