作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;作者应适量增加从句的使用量。
which shows the American’s orientation of being friends. These factors such as Equality, mutual recognition, sincerity are the core of friendship. Friends need not to pretend while a friend may well be reckoned the masterpiece of nature. According to the survey, since 1985, the data have shown that the friendship is constantly losing in quality and quantity. Furthermore, research has been demonstrated that one quarter Americans have no intimacy confidants who can reveal their true feelings and the quantity of confidants have declined from four persons to two persons in terms of the average quantity. Kornblum, Janet have published his research on the USA Today and declared that one quarter Americans have no confidants.