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2012年专四作文真题:端午节

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要求：: 题目 The Dragon Boat Festival
说明 The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数：200满分：100分

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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；文中词汇表达不够丰富，要多积累高级词汇。

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The American’s views of friendship have been revealed in many films and television works. The only situation can not stand for the whole American views on friendship. Therefore, it is necessary to analyze these films about friendship for whole American’s views of friendship. Such as The Perks of Being a Wallflower, The Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants, super bad, , Mean Girls and so forth,The Perks of Being a Wallflower and so forth, those films are conducive to the analysis of the views .

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