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2012年专四作文真题:端午节

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:51浏览次数:6299
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题目 The Dragon Boat Festival
说明 The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分88.5分
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒;文章层次较为清晰。

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The major method that predecessor has taken is to summarize and analyze the literature review and cultural conflicts. Lou Xianyan’s “Views on Friendship of China and The United States” is a good example for that. She has cited traditional definitions of two cultures to support her viewpoint, so various dictionaries have been regarded as the main tool for this research. Besides, case analysis is also widely used method for cultural differences. American Friendship in the Eyes of the Chinese, written by Lu Yan pointed out Wall theory and Face theory. The two theories mainly explain the American friendship. Lu Yan has viewed it from multi-angles including independence and interdependence, equality and hierarchy, mobility and stability, the self and harmony, High Context Culture and Low Context Culture. Moreover, Huang Ying analyzed the different views of friendship through dividing Interpersonal Relation Theory into three types based on Human Relations Theory and got the differences. In recent years, the research methods for cultural difference have changed into contrastive analysis. In addition, many scholars have analyzed cultural differences by probing some cultural phenomena, mottos, campus films and so forth. Many factors such as system, institution, gender, geography, age and educational level have been taken into account.

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