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2009年专四作文真题:旅游对环境的影响

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:45浏览次数:9978
要求:
题目 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
说明 Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don’t think so.What is your opinion?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分60.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文中词汇表达不够丰富,要多积累高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

The American’s views of friendship have been revealed in many films and televisions works. The only situation can not stand for the whole American views on friendship. Therefore, it is necessary to analyze these films about friendship for whole American’s views of friendship. Such as The Perks of Being a Wallflower, The Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants, Super Bad, Mean Girls and so forth,The Perks of Being a Wallflower and so forth, those films are conducive to the analysis of the views.

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