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Conparing to the Chinese friendship, Chu xiuli (2008 69-70) views the Chinese friendship that Confucianism constrains friend relationship to a high degree and this thought makes people be afraid of pointing out others’ shortcoming, which becomes the barrier for the development of friendship. Except all mentioned above, For example, when Joey moves out of the apartment in which chandler lives together, chandler finds a new roommate Addie , but finds it unsuitable by virtue of the different living habits and hobby. For the American, it is easy to establish relationship but it is very hard to maintain a long term friend relationship. However, American’s view has been influenced by realism and pragmatism, the purpose will relate to many factors such as family background, educational background, interest relationship, affective interaction and so forth. Contrary to the purpose that Chinese make friends, the purpose shows more simple. The basis of Chinese making friends is common language and interests. The purpose of American making friends is more complex than the Chinese. There is an old saying “It’s not important what you know,but who you know”. From this perspective of time, American friendship will disappear gradually as time goes by, for example, when Monica and Rachel were in senior high school, they are good friends but they are seldom being together after graduation even if Monica was not been invited to Rachel’s wedding. The passion for friends American cherishes will transfer to someone else soon. Therefore, the friendship will disappear soon if they do not link each other after a period of time. For both countries, the time of friendship lasting is totally different. For Chinese, the time friendship lasting is more stable even for whole life. What’s more, it is different for both countries to develop and maintain the friendship, Chinese pay more attention for making friends. As the old saying goes, “It’s better to be alone than in bad company”, “poverty tries friend”, “A friend to all is a friend to none” and so forth. By contrast, it is easier to establish a new friend relationship, meanwhile, it is also easy to give up. For instance, in the friends, in the central park, they often make friends with a cup of coffee or cookies.
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