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2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:50浏览次数:11740
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题目 Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
说明 Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. The amount of private car owners would depend on the emission levels, i.e. engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the public. Some regard it as an effective way to control of the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city. But others don’t think so. What’s your opinion? Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇;作者在句法层面做的很棒。

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by contrast, Chu xiuli (2008 69-70) views the Chinese friendship that Confucianism constrains friend relationship to a high degree and this thought makes people be afraid of pointing out others’ shortcoming, which becomes the barrier for the development of friendship. Except all mentioned above, For example, when Joey moves out of the apartment in which chandler lives together, chandler finds a new roommate Addie , but finds it unsuitable by virtue of the different living habits and hobby. For the American, it is easy to establish relationship but it is very hard to maintain a long term friend relationship. However, American’s view has been influenced by realism and pragmatism, the purpose will relate to many factors such as family background, educational background, interest relationship, affective interaction and so forth. Contrary to the purpose that Chinese make friends, the purpose shows more simple. The basis of Chinese making friends is common language and interests. The purpose of American making friends is more complex than the Chinese. There is an old saying “It’s not important what you know,but who you know”. From this perspective of time, American friendship will disappear gradually as time goes by, for example, when Monica and Rachel were in senior high school, they are good friends but they are seldom being together after graduation even if Monica was not been invited to Rachel’s wedding. The passion for friends American cherishes will transfer to someone else soon. Therefore, the friendship will disappear soon if they do not link each other after a period of time. For both countries, the time of friendship lasting is totally different. For Chinese, the time friendship lasting is more stable even for whole life. What’s more, it is different for both countries to develop and maintain the friendship, Chinese pay more attention for making friends. As the old saying goes, “It’s better to be alone than in bad company”, “poverty tries friend”, “A friend to all is a friend to none” and so forth. By contrast, it is easier to establish a new friend relationship, meanwhile, it is also easy to give up. For instance, in the friends, in the central park, they often make friends with a cup of coffee or cookies.

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