2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,online shopping is popular with more and more person.Online shopping seems to be a trend.Peoples focused attention on online shopping in order to buy the better goods. Of course,online shopping have too much benefits.because it is so convenient for us.Moreover,online shopping can make we buy a variety of things,and usually cheaper than the store.In spite of this , online shopping have many possible need to solve.For instance,if we buy a piece of cloth ,we can't touch the simple things and don't know the size.So that the cloth is not what we want. The sum up,online shopping have good and bad.It seems to me,online shopping is worth to promote.As long as correct there weaknesses.