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Scene, which is associated with the setting of an act and answers the questions "when?" and "where?", is related to the world view of materialism and minimal or non-existent free will. Burke defines the scene as “the background of an act, the situation in which it occurred[3]. Americans have different circle of friend. By contrast, the Chinese have a more stable and complex circle of friend. Chinese will make friends basing on the original circle of friend. American have different friend cycles. They will make friends in different situations such as party, work place, coffee house and so on. However, every cycle keeps separate independence. For example, in friends, Monica’s credit was been stolen and she found the person who have participated in the dancing class. Therefore, the atmosphere and the enthusiasm the person has attract her and she make friends with her. Besides, the main setting, The Central Perk coffee house provides six old friends with a place where they can communicate and make new friends. Environment have greater impact on mode of making friends. The expectation for friends is lower than the Chinese.
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