2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

Scene, which is associated with the setting of an act and answers the questions "when?" and "where?", is related to the world view of materialism and minimal or non-existent free will. Burke defines the scene as “the background of an act, the situation in which it occurred[3]. Americans have different circle of friend. By contrast, the Chinese have a more stable and complex circle of friend. Chinese will make friends basing on the original circle of friend. American have different circle of friend. They will make friends in different situations such as party, work place, coffee house and so on. However, every cycle keeps separate independence. For example, in friends, Monica’s credit was stolen and she found the person who have participated in the dancing class. However, the person 's enthusiasm attract her to make friends with her. Besides, the main setting, The Central Perk coffee house provides six old friends with a place where they can communicate and make new friends. Environment has greater impact on mode of making friends. The expectation for friends is lower than the Chinese.