过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩。
Ross: is a university professor who has profound knowledge but engages in the boring research of archaeology. His seriousness and persistence for knowledge and cavil to other’s word s have become the ironic objects. Moreover, he cannot tolerate others to break the rule. Meanwhile, his ex-wife is a lesbian and have a child with her. He always want to persuade others the rightness of his opinion and like to correct other’s little errors. Besides, when he live in the hotel, he used to covet little advantages until the last moment he leaving.
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