拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
Ross: is a university professor who has profound knowledge but engages in the boring research of archaeology. His seriousness and persistence for knowledge and cavil to other’s words have become the ironic object. Moreover, he cannot tolerate others to break the rule. Meanwhile, his ex-wife is a lesbian and has a child with her. He always wants to persuade others the rightness of his opinion and likes to correct other’s little errors. Besides, when he lives in the hotel, he used to covet little advantages until the last moment he leaving.
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