2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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nowadays,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing.the relevant reasons lies in three ways. first of all,the pollution is getting worse.large city tends to be more cars which are the main cause of carbon oxide.secondly,the issues of health is another cause.the quality of what we eat can't get good guarantee.as time goes by,that leads to the health problems.the last but not the least,people in large cities suffer great pressure from work.they usually have great workload and to get promotion,they have to make themselves more competitive. to solve this,the environment issue should be done at first.the local government should take measures,such as environmental-friendly technology,increase the green area and so on to improve the environment.then,people shoud raise their awareness of health and care more about themselves.at the same time,the sports facilities should also be built so that people can get access to exercises.finally,people should learn how to release their stress,only in this way can they get better in life. in a word,the improvement of life quality has a lot to do with the contribution of goverment and individuals.