2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇基本功不错，建议今后多用高级词汇；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错。

Phoebe: is an odd woman who encounters a terrible suffering. Therefore, her behavior always expresses so wired and strange that other old friends hard understand her. Meanwhile, she is a vegetarian and superstition. His characteristic was deeply influenced by her sad childhood. In her childhood, birth father escaping, being abandoned by birth mother, stepmother suicide, Stepfather being putting in prison, her terrible sufferings shape her weird personality, she always sings some strange songs and give others an irrelevant answer but she is the most objective and rational person and often serve as the role of stopping other old friends from fighting each other. What’s more, she likes music creating and the “smelly cat” is her representative work. Abnormal childhood leaded her so naive that she has always believed the existence Santa Claus until Joey told her the truth. Phoebe never tells lies and pays more attention to the friendship. She cherishes passion for the charity. Rachel : is a doctor’s daughter who lives in an affluent life. When she was in the period of high school, she was very popular as the cheering squad leader in high school. She is a spoiled girl who likes to snivel and willful at the beginning of the situation comedy. In the tenth season, she has gown to be an independently professional woman. Moreover, her character also becomes responsible and considerate. Rachel has never worked for any company, however, in the first season, she came to live with old friend Monica after running away from her wedding. Later, her father refused to pay any credit debt unless she promised him to back home for the wedding. Monica and other old friends encouraged her to seek self-independent life in New York. Even though her image presenting us is a spoiled girl but she become more and more independent in the future. Her mother is pround of her progress for independent life and her father said that Rachel is the only daughter who he was proud of.