小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have many good friends.but,luoxiu is my best friends.she is my classmate.she like studying english and article.she also like music .she come from meishan.she like fresh brown bread and apple juice.she is alway tell me that wasting food is very wrong things.because there were so many hungry people in the world.