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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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As the chart describing:people with a doctoral degree earn about 1550 weekly on average, almost three times as those with less than a high school diploma.It is obviously conveying that:the higher degree you obtain,the more money you will earn. There are diverse reasons accounting for this phenomenon.In the first place, people with a high degree are regarded as those who have knowledge and broad horizon,which contribute mostly to their career.Additionally, people with a high degree,mostly have wider social relationship,which really account for higher-paid job. From my point of view, the more education will benefit me more, not only can improve my competition in job hunting, but can also furnish my mind, enrich my life.

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