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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第45篇:实践学习和阅读学习哪个更好些

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:27浏览次数:11494
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作文题目:

Close observation opens up new worlds in many ways. It can tell us things we would otherwise never know. Most often, we see more when we look and listen. Fortunately, movies give us that option, but is requires diligence. Compare and contrast learning by doing to learning by reading.

In your opinion, which is better? Explain.

近距离观察能够开拓视野。对比和比较实践学习和阅读学习。依你看,哪个更好些?并作出解释。

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用户的作文(系统评分88.0分
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作者词汇基本功不错,建议今后多用学术词汇;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Reading as base, doing as practice The option of learning by reading or learning by doing is always a controversial problem among learners. Which is the better choice? In fact, both of these two ways of learning benefit in different parts through learning. I believe that they are the same important in learning period for several reasons. First of all, reading gives us fundamental knowledge of what we learn and makes our action more purposing. Nobody could do anything well without the basic knowledge of a task. Say something about myself as an example. Several years ago when asked to study the living habits of a particular kind of butterfly by my teacher, I was so passionate towards the interesting task that I had never experienced before that I got on my way to the botanical garden immediately without acknowledging anything about it. Observing those butterflies a whole day long with great patience and passion, I thought I must have learned a lot. However, when asked about the harvest I got, my brain was in a sheer blank. Later on, my teacher told me that doing some reading about the butterflies before practical action would surely make my trip more purposing. Meanwhile, doing gives us comprehensive sensual feelings of what we learn, which is something impossible to get through reading. We could only create the image in our brain by reading words while doing provides us an opportunity to verify, which the essential difference between reading and doing is. I’ll raise Fabre for instance. As an expert in researching insects, he spent almost all his life observing in the nature and recording the consequence. Reading books of former scientists only provide him little about insects. In order to get something of his own, Fabre climbed mountains, waded streams and went to anywhere possible to find and observe insects. Also doing experiments in his home was also part of his work. By integrating all his hard work, he finished the famous book, THE INSECTS. Fabre’s accomplishment gives us a perfect proof of the importance of doing in learning.

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