2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Recently a topic came into our view about people's work and salary has some relationship with his educational level. As we all know, education is very important to everyone, it is an easy way to live a better life. Even for some people study is the only way to change their poor situation, but there is something new to show education's importance. As is shown by the figure in the picture has some rules.From top to the bottom with the job changes the figure changes too. The higher the salary is that the unemployment rate becomes lower.From what is said upwards, it goes without saying that it remains education pays. As far as I am concerned,education is important no matter how age you are,if you have chance or in college now, study hard.Because education pays.