托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第46篇:是否每个人都有接受高等教育的权力

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There's no doubt that everyone is bound to receive the same right to higher education,for since the hypothesize of everyone has the same right occurred,something about right has carved into our heart.Not only for 人格，but also the same to education.As it's known to all that education has played how significant a role in our daily life and how it has changed a person's future.But I'll analysis the question from various point of views: Above all,China need talent,and one of the most important part of cultivating it is to providing them great education.Secondly,maybe persons will worry about the problems that if one is not concentrate enough to study,he may not catch up with so high level a format,however,I'd rather consider it as an excuse,for the great person has ever said:Hold different approach to different students,there's no bad guy,only bad teachers.Thirdly,higher education is equal to higher civilization and national quality,education is bound to be an unforgettable factor to move it.