2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I am born in province of Guangdong.There is no doubt that Guangzhou where is one of the richest city in China is the most important city in Guangdong.Canton Tower is a sign of Guangzhou.It is the most beautiful building that I have ever seen,so it pays to see.An advantage of Canton Tower is that it is so high and very special.There are a flower squre and Zhujiang River nearby it and a number of activities at night.So is romantic environment that lovers like to appointment in here.