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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章层次较为清晰。
In my mind, first and foremost as communication between young people with their family member. This is the most important thing for a normal life. The parents want to know about their children everything: such as what they eat, what they feel, and what they need. The homework is hard, the classmate is nice, the teacher is amiable. All of the things the parents take care. In 1998, the computer and video game were popular. 80 percent young people like it very much. When the weekends, after school, and in the holiday, all of the time used to play games(as some guys like reading novels ). They do not have anytime to talk with parents, shared their good happens or bad happens. Parents want to help their children to solve the difficult problem. Such as homework, or something likes a boy liked a girl and what is the most important thing to look for in a relationship with a man or a woman. They like to play with their children and talk with them. Even just told something especially stories they known. They like shopping with their kids, told they which food made they stronger; which kind food is junk food, you just tasty it and do not eat too much. They would like to teach you how to make a delicious food and some detail about how to wash the clothes. All of young people need to take out your book, phone,and computer, spent more time with your parents and your family.You can help parents to cook a dinner, and tell them you like it. You can watch TV together and laugh out loud. You need to ask help when you do not know how to solve the problem. You need to say good night when you go to sleep. Please to take more and more time with your parents and your family even just go for a walk. That is the great memory in your life. Please hand it! Do not waste too much time for the video games or online games, take more and more time chaperonage with your parents and your family; when you are old you will thank yourself for today. I sincerely hope all of the young people take more and more time chaperonage with your parents and your family. They are the only one who from a small baby to young men has been on your side. The games and novels are just killing time, it is not your life. Do not waste time on that, cherish your time with your parents and your family.
