小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，注意文中少数拼写错误。

I have a good friend named Haly, she is a beautiful girl with a long black hair, and big eyes. She likes singing songs and playing computers, at sametime, she is also good at playing chess. I like her very much because she always helps me when I felt sad.