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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；从句数量稍显不足，注意增加从句和复杂句的使用。
In China,there is a saying that"slim waist".In the light of this,I will recommend Canton Tower as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China. Canton Tower is located in Tianhe district Guangzhou where is belong to Guangdong province.There is no doubt that it is the most building that I have ever seen.There are a flower square and Zhujiang river nearby it.A number of flowers line the square with a various of flowers,filling the air with sweet scent.It features clear river,wide square and many colorful light at night,which is a feast for the eyes,so a lot of lovers like appointment in here. Many foreign people travels in here as soon as Happy New year.What fun traveling it go to here！
