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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Our spring outing Yesterday was Friday.Our monitor suggested spring outing.We were really happy and we listed the things we maybe need such as,water,fruit,bread and so on.Today we gathered at the school gate at around 7 a.m.We climbed the mountain and soon we reached the top.We were so excited because we all succeed.We took the things which we prepared and enjoyed them.However,before we left,I found that the rubbish was here and there.So I advised our friends to clean them.We picked up the rubbish and threw them into the rubbish bin.Though we felt tired,we were proud that we keep the scenery beautiful.I really enjoy this spring outing.
