2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。

In China,there is a saying that"Conton Tower is slim waist".Canton Tower is a sign of Guangzhou.In the light of this,I will recommend Canton Tower as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China. Canton Tower is located in Tianhe district Guangzhou where is in Guangdong province.There is no doubt that it is the most building that I have ever seen。Thanks to its beautiful and width,famous singer enjoy to holds concert in here.There are flowers square and Zhujiang river nearby it. Flower lines the square with various flowers,filling the air with sweet scents.It features clear river,wide square and colorful light at night,which is a feast for the eyes,so a lot of lovers like appointment in here. People travels in here as soon as Happy New year.What fun traveling it go to here！