新东方托福高分作文:你更想在大公司还是小公司工作?

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；很好的运用了从句，同时句法错误极少；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。

No doubt , I choose to work in small company because , there are too many benefit that outmunber its disadvantage not to choose , but working for a large company has advantage no more than its disadvantage the most important benefit of working for a small company is that I will have many chance to develop In general , a small company is a developing enterprise it is not easy to absorb many excellent employees If I neter this small company , i think that the boss will appreciate me and give me mant opportunities to reveal my abilities Only I let the job do well , I am sure that i will rise very rapidly On contrary to this , a large company is already a high developed talent working for it A good position will absorbs handreds of a opponents it will take me a lot of time and vigor to get this position . Maybe I have no chance to win this competition at all Another benefit of working for a small company which working for a large company almost cannot achieve is that I can learn more skills in a small company than in a large company As shown above , a small company is a developing enterprise this mean that it have no a great deal of money to employ many person so I can do all kinds of jobs at the same time I think that this will be useful to compete in the society but a large company . maybe I only engage a monotonous job over a long period of time I believe that this will be helpless to improve my capacity of course, choosing to work for a large company also has advantage to some extent For example , it will afford handsome salary and will be not easy to fail in business competition . I believe that every large company originates from a small company maybe I will become an important person when the small company which I work become a large company