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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9570
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
要求
1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
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能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

There's no denying the fact that online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology. Nowadays,it is common to shopping online.Many people like it because it's easy and fast.However everything has two sides and online shopping is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.A case in point is the quality problem about online shopping. Confronted with these bad shopping experience,we should take a series of effective measures to sole the problems.For one thing we should improve the relevant laws to protect our legal rights.For another we should band those sailor who didn't obey the rules. Nonetheless,I believe that online shopping has more benifits to us.

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