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There's no denying the fact that online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology. Nowadays,it is common to shopping online.Many people like it because it's easy and fast.However everything has two sides and online shopping is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.A case in point is the quality problem about online shopping. Confronted with bad shopping experience,we should take a series of effective measures to solve the problems.For one thing we should improve the relevant laws to protect our legal rights.For another we should band those sailors who didn't obey the rules. Nonetheless,I believe that online shopping has more benifits to us.