2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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I’m present to hear you will visit my hometown,as a person who have lived in the town for 20 years,I will introduce the most interesting place to you. My hometown has a long history,it also has beautiful butterfly,green bush,clean stream.The dun yi park is a sign in our hometown that provide fresh air and reise lots of people in our hometown.It has a big bush and a clean brook.when you go to there,you will see beautiful butterfly around the fatistic flowers.If you feel tried in work and study,you can go to there and enjoy the warm and beautiful park. my hometown also have some delicious food.THE TRDITIONAL RESTRANT is the best restrant in our hometown.It provide choclate and ice-cream,the dumpings is the best delicious food. My hometown has many interesting place ,if you visit my hometown,you will get more suprise