2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，高级词汇使用稍显不足；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Last night, my wife wants to buy a bag of diaper for my baby. But I don't want to go shopping in the supermarket, and I have bought them on the internet. There are a lot of diapers, for example, history, mother, superman and so on. Shipper sends the diaper to me at 14:00 today. So I like shopping on line. Firstly, you don't go to the market. This time, you can do anything. Secondly, all kinds of thing in the shop of internet. When you buy them, you can review it that you like the thing. And the shopkeeper cann't says you anything. Finally, you can back it to the shopkeeper when you regret. But a piece of trouble online shopping. You find the thing is bad, and you lost some money when you back it to the shopkeeper, and so on.