文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;文章层次较为清晰;可适当增加复杂句的使用量。
I have a good friend who is a beautiful girl and has long black hair, even have two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl who likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much.