2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；词汇表达用的较丰富，另外请检查文章的单词拼写。

'Rumors to the wise',this is a slang that we all would approve of it.However,not all the people can ensure that he do everthing in impartial judgement with soul.Accutually,we could easily are pushed around by some appearance which can't stand for anything.For example,when you listhen to some girls to disgussing another girls's bad sayings.you choose to trust them.But,after a short time ,you find that these girls just are jealous of another girl.what they said are also artificial.As the same theory,what you have saw,it also can't be an evidence to judge all the whole thing.I believe everyone woulde fully apprieciate the fact of this saying.