托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；能够熟练使用从句并合理分配；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。

these are have advantage and disadvantage for childhood this is very hard to say ,which better than another when growing up in country means a certain amount of isolation you're in a small town or on a farm and not with a lot of people the people will meet to every day tend to be just like you most will be the same race as you have a same background as you and will have gone to the same schools as you In the city , you will see so many different they are from different races and different culture you will get something interesting mix city people tend to come from a lot of different place and more round a lot people in the city can live a same apartment build for 20 years and never get to know neighbors in country , everybody have to know everybody for child, that means the country is more secure child can get to lost or hurt in the city and have no one to turn to In country , everybody's a neighbors , people in the country feel connected to each other A child growing up in the city has the advantage of a lot of interesting and exciting places to visit there are go yo zoo, museum , art galleries , and concert and also have something different restaurant and different king of food