文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
Along with the developing of technology ,more and more digital products coming into our life.Such as ceil-phone,laptop,and camera changed our lifestyle. Nowadays, it is common to use smart phone.Many people like reading news from our phones because it's convenient and fast,besides we can get the latest news at the first time no matter where you are.Digitization make our life easier we can have online-courses,net-meeting,buying food and clothes on the Internet.We are at a Digital age consequently,were more comfortable than before. But everything has two sides and digitization is not an exception it has disadvantages too.It bringing us convenient but also safety problem.A case in point is personal information leakage. All in all,we are at Digital age now,all it's advantage and disadvantage we have to accept.