文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
Along with the development of technology,more and more digital products come into our life.Such as ceil-phone,laptop,and camera changed our lifestyle. Nowadays, it is common to use smart phone.Many people like reading news from our phones because it's convenient and fast,besides we can get the latest news at the first time no matter where you are.Digitization makes our life easier we can have online-courses,net-meeting,buying food and clothes on the Internet.We are at a Digital age consequently,were more comfortable than before. But everything has two sides and digitization is not an exception it has disadvantages too.It has bring us convenient but also safety problem.A case in point is personal information leakage. All in all,we are at Digital age now,all it's advantage and disadvantage we have to accept.